The Outline and Essay- Three Things I Like To Do
Three Things I Like To Do
I have three things that I like to do, daydreaming, random writing, and aloofing. In my opinion, I like to daydream because it is weird yet somehow productive. Most people thought that daydreaming is always related to unproductive things. They assume that daydreaming is unproductive because nothing is being done and time is being wasted. But for me, it is productive because while daydreaming there must be something that I think which needs to be solved. When I have some roblems or some plans, I always daydream before I do these stuff. Second thing, I like to do random writing, it is the time for me to write everything in my mind even my work, imagination and task. That is why I bring my pocket book and my pen wherever I am. Most people assume that bringing pocket book is like a diligent student, in fact they do not know what actually inside my book is, that is too random. However, this random writing have so many benefits for me to remember what actually I have been thinking to make easier my works/tasks. One more weird thing, I like to aloof my self from a crowd. Aloofing my self from a crowd is kind a booster for my self because I can recharge my energy and my mood by being alone. That is true if this is weird, but for me somehow it is productive (again). I like to do these things for reason, it benefits me. Being alone is a tool for me to think and solve my problem because I can’t clearly think in a crowd. I can even think and solve my problem in a crowd, but it reffers to daydreaming because doing this stuff is such being alone and having my own world in the middle of crowd. These two things is correlative, but three of them are weird. The thing is that these three weird activities help me a lot to speed up my work, it is unusual, but that is the way I am.
The Outline
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Introduction:
Thesis statement: I have three things that
I like to do which are daydreaming, random writing, and aloofing.
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Body 1 (Daydreaming)
Ma: Daydreaming
mi: definition
Ma: Daydreaming
mi: definition
Ma: Unproductive
Mi: the reason
Ma: Productive
Mi: the reason
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Body 2 ( Random Writing)
ma: random writing
mi: definition
ma: random writing
mi: definition
Ma: expressing mind
Mi: the example
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Body 3 (Aloofing)
Ma: Aloofing
Mi: definition
Ma: Aloofing
Mi: definition
Ma: Aloofing is kind a booster
Mi: The reason
Ma: The function of aloofing
Mi: the reason
Things Like To Do
Most people have their own way to kill
their time or just love to do something. Killing the time plays as the
activities for people especially me. In killing my time I have my own
activities to be done. Ofcourse these activities are preferable for me because
of some reason. Here are the activities, I have three things that I like to do
which are daydreaming, random writing, and aloofing
First
thing I like to do is daydreaming. Daydreaming is having our own thought and
mind in the same time by doing nothing but our brain and imagination is
spinning. Most people thought that daydreaming is always related to
unproductive things. They assume that daydreaming is unproductive because
nothing is being done but time is being wasted. But for me, I like to daydream
because it is weird, yet somehow productive. It is productive because while I
am daydreaming there must be something that I think which needs to be solved. When
I have some problems or some plans, I always daydream before I do these stuff. It
is helpful because it helps me a lot to speed up my work.
Second thing I
like to do is random writing. Random writing is when we randomly write anything
in our mind. It must be related with everything, such as task, work, plan, even
my imagination, that is why I always bring my pocket book. Most people
sometimes also thought that bringing pocketbook is like a diligent student, in
fact they don’t know what actually inside my book is because it is too random. However
this random writing has so many benefit for me to remember what actually I have
been thinking to make easier my work/task.
Last weird thing
that I like to do is aloofing. Aloofing is when we are letting ourself to be
alone and escaping for the crowd. Aloofing for people may be weird, but for me
it is kind a booster. It boosts myself easily because aloofing is such a toll
for me to recharge my energy and my mood by being alone. For me aloofing can be
said as a productive thing (again). While I can’t think clearly in the middle
of crowd, so that aloofing is a productive thing because it is my best option
to think clearly. I do aloofing with some reasons because it benefits me. Being
alone is a tool for me to solve my problems because I can’t think clearly in
the middle of crowd.
Talking about
things we like to do is not that easy. People must have their own reason to do
these stuff. Doing weird things such as daydreaming, random writing and
aloofing are kind useless thing when we do not know the reason. It is unusual, but that is the way I am. But the thing
is that these three things are quiet weird yet somehow it is productive
because it always speeds up my work.
Green: Thesis Statement
Red: Major supporting Sentence
Purple: minor supporting sentence
Blue: Conclusion each paragraph
Blue: Conclusion
Hello mea:D
ReplyDeleteAs usuall, I like your paragraph. The way ypu kill your spare time is unusuall but I like that. Its give me a new thing to do in my spare time. For the sugesstion, I think you can elaborate with something like in the second paragraph its just too general for me, maybe you can put something like what the genre that you oftenly made while doing random writing. Overall, great work! Keep it up!^^
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ReplyDeleteGlad to be here and reading your flawless paragraph. The way you serve the paragraph clear enough and really brief. You linking all the paragraphs so it looks unify. My suggestion perhaps the use of word "daydream" and "daydreaming". If you make it as an activity, you need to use "daydreaming" instead "daydream" since it is noun. Lastly, on the last paragraph, you forget to make "things" (plural) instead you wrote it "thing" (singular). Anyway, sir German told us to put our first assignment paragraph in this post as well :)
I think these all my suggestions, hopefully may help you. Overall, you are doing really great tho :))
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Inanda
I think you make a god essay, meantime, your outline makes this essay very easy for us to understand. what you said is very interesting and detailed. I think this is a good easy. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHi Mea, it's good essay, all written clearly, you pour your idea and draw it so clear. I don't think I have any suggestions upon this 😂. Keep it up
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ReplyDeleteHello Annah, Your paragraph is organized and knowledgeable too. However, I want to give suggestion about this word "In killing my time I have my own activities to be done" changed to In killing my time I have activities to be done and also changed this "However this random writing has so many benefit for me to remember what actually I have been thinking to make easier my work/task" into However, this random writing has so many benefits for me such as to make me remember what I'm currently thinking and make easier my work/task. That's all apart from that it's all good.
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Most people have their own way to kill their time or just love to do something. Killing the time plays as the activities for people especially me. In killing my time I have activities to be done. Ofcourse these activities are preferable for me because of some reason. Here are the activities, I have three things that I like to do which are daydreaming, random writing, and aloofing
First thing I like to do is daydreaming. Daydreaming is having our own thought and mind in the same time by doing nothing but our brain and imagination is spinning. Most people thought that daydreaming is always related to unproductive things. They assume that daydreaming is unproductive because nothing is being done but time is being wasted. But for me, I like daydreaming because it is weird, yet somehow productive. It is productive because while I am daydreaming there must be something that I think which needs to be solved. When I have some problems or some plans, I always daydream before I do these stuff. It is helpful because it helps me a lot to speed up my work.
Second thing I like to do is random writing. Random writing is when we randomly write anything in our mind. It must be related with everything, such as task, work, plan, even my imagination, that is why I always bring my pocket book. Most people sometimes also thought that bringing pocketbook is like a diligent student, in fact they don’t know what actually inside my book is because it is too random. However this random writing has so many benefits for me such as to make me remember what I am currently thinking and make easier my work/task.
Last weird thing that I like to do is aloofing. Aloofing is when we are letting ourself to be alone and escaping for the crowd. Aloofing for people may be weird, but for me it is kind a booster. It boosts myself easily because aloofing is such a toll for me to recharge my energy and my mood by being alone. For me aloofing can be said as a productive thing (again). While I can’t think clearly in the middle of crowd, so that aloofing is a productive thing because it is my best option to think clearly. I do aloofing with some reasons because it benefits me. Being alone is a tool for me to solve my problems because I can’t think clearly in the middle of crowd.
Talking about things we like to do is not that easy. People must have their own reason to do these stuffs. Doing weird things such as daydreaming, random writing and aloofing are kind useless thing when we do not know the reason. It is unusual, but that is the way I am. But in short is that these three things are quiet weird yet somehow it is productive because it always speeds up my work.