EVERYONE SHOULD BE AN ENTREPRENEUR
To reach high profit in business, being an entrepreneur is not bad idea. Entrepreneur is
the one who have new innovation to be created as new things that will be
recognized as the risk taker and failures in around perceived opportunities. (PIÇAK, 2011) To be an entrepreneur
is not a simple thing because it has high risk and not all of people will be
brave to take the risk. Besides it has high risk, it must have high
opportunities to start a success. There are some countries that has been a
developed country which has high number of GNP (Gross National Product) and GDP
(Gross Domestic Product) because of entrepreneurship. United States, Japan, and
Germany are some of the examples, these are counted as developed country because
many people choose to be entrepreneur which has large benefit and profit that
can lead to the increase of total GNP (USnews, 2017) . Therefore, there are
three main reasons why everyone should be an entrepreneur
First,
Indonesia is a developing country that lack of entrepreneur. By adding 2%
entrepreneurs, Indonesia may be able to be a developed country which is able to
prosper. (Furnito, 2015) . According to
thejakartapost.com we can see that Indonesia need to be developed country to
make the life of people is prosper. The total amount of people in Indonesia is
around 252.20 million (Badan Pusat Statistik, 2017) . It means Indonesia
needs 2% of 252.20 million people to be entrepreneurs which needs around 5,050
people more to be entrepreneur.
Second,
the dependency ration in Indonesia is quiet high. It takes around 47.7% which
means the number of unproductive people is higher than productive people 47.7% (Badan Pusat
Statistik, 2017) .
In this case Indonesia need to increase the number of entrepreneur to make sure
that productive ages can cover all the unproductive people’s need. By being
entrepreneur, the profit taken may be increase and it influences the dependency
ration for Indonesia itself.
Third,
Indonesia is facing Bonus Demography (Demographic Dividend). It is a condition
when Indonesia has large number of productive ages / working ages that may be
covering all the unproductive age’s needs (Behrman, 2015) . By having large
working ages Indonesia can increase the number of entrepreneur and it will add
the GNP and value of Indonesia itself. Imagine if all the productive ages in
Indonesia becoming entrepreneur. Actually we need only around 5,050 people to be
entrepreneur but when all of the working ages that stated in Demographic
Dividend. It is a big opportunity for Indonesia to maximize the potential we
have. Demography Dividend will be only until 2030, it can be forecasted that
after 2030 the economic of Indonesia may be stable.
Being
an entrepreneur is a big risk and big opportunities. Just the way people think
and be brave for any risk they may get both before or after. Some people may
think that not everyone should be an entrepreneur because they have their own
uniqueness and capability. Not all of people will capable to be an entrepreneur
and they may choose their own way to get a job. But however until 2030 is
Indonesia’s big opportunity to repair all the things due to the development of
economic itself. By using their capability and uniqueness they can be whatever
they want and apply this to be an entrepreneur. However to create and repair
all the things to be good must need sacrifice at least until 2030, at the end
they will choose rather to stay become an entrepreneur or turn back for what
they had been before.
In
every statement and ideas there must be some arguments. Indonesia is currently
lack of entrepreneur, while we are also developed country as this far. To make Indonesia
become developed country is the responsibility of the people too, not only the
government. So there must be cooperation between people and government to
create this new thing in Indonesia by being entrepreneur. If there are only
5,050 people needed to become entrepreneur, imagine if 100 million people with
working ages become entrepreneur, Indonesia will be a very developed country
and high economic development rate. That is why in order to maximize the
existence of Demography Dividend until 2030, everyone should be an
entrepreneur.
Reference
Badan Pusat
Statistik. (2017, September Sunday). Estimated Population of Selected
Countries, 2000-2014 . Retrieved from bps.go.id: https://www.bps.go.id/linkTableDinamis/view/id/960
Badan Pusat
Statistik. (2017, September Sunday). Dependency Ratio by Province,
2010-2035. Retrieved from bps.go.id: https://www.bps.go.id/linkTabelStatis/view/id/1275
Behrman, H.-P. K.
(2015). Indonesian's Perspective and Population Demography. Indonesia
Demographic Institute, National Development Planning. Jakarta: Indonesia
Demographic Institute
Behrman, H.-P. K.
(2015). Indonesian's Perspective and Population Demography. Indonesia
Demographic Institute, National Development Planning. Jakarta: Indonesia
Demographic Institute.
Furnito, A. (2015,
May Tuesday). On making our entrepreneurs less entrepreneurial.
Retrieved from thejakartapost.com:
http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2015/05/26/on-making-our-entrepreneurs-less-entrepreneurial.html
USnews. (2017,
September Sunday). BEST COUNTRY. Retrieved from usnews.com: https://www.usnews.com/news/best-countries/entrepreneurship-rankings
PIÇAK, O. E.
(2011). Entrepreneurship, National Culture and Turkey. International
Journal of Business and Social Science Vol. 2 No. 16; , 2, 6.
USnews. (2017,
September Sunday). BEST COUNTRY. Retrieved from usnews.com:
https://www.usnews.com/news/best-countries/entrepreneurship-rankings
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Hi, Annah~
ReplyDeleteNice arguments! Actually, your arguments are good since you give evidence or data. Perhaps, my suggestion only about the used of comma or misused punctuation, such as in the first paragraph "people in Indonesia is around 252,20 million ", I think comma should be replaced with full-stop (.) and "5050" is it should be "5,050". Anyway, the words "thejakartapost.com" is it should be like that or in in italic? Lastly, your reference list need to be sort based on alphabet.
I think these all. Overall, you are great~~ Cheers
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